Friday, October 17, 2008

English Enlightenment

So far this year i have learned alot but most of it has yet to sink in. I have to be honest i wish i could some how just download some of what we have learned into my brain and that would be the end of it but that is not technologialy possible at this point in our countries tech support era. But i have improved my wrighting skills such as dialoge and comoma ussage my spelling still needs work though. As for my reading i think that this nine weeks has been most benifical now i dont just read to read i read to find a deeper meaning in the story in the words of mr. Qualls a Golden Nuggett. The technology that i now have in my arsenal is this. what i am doing right now never before would i have thought that i would be sitting at a computer doning somthing for english other than wrighting an essay, and now look at me i'm blogging i cant belive it, and i know there is still so much more to lear.

Sunday, October 12, 2008

Loves Dragon

I am wrighting a book called Loves Dragon cheack it out and tell me what you think of it so far. thank you.

Dream Wishing
"I know your here siasiami come out and die," Ai demanded
"If i were to come out i would not be the one to die Ai dragon," Siasiami replied with a hint of pride in her sinester voice.
"Ahhh! you snake,"Ai screamed as siasiami's fangs peirced her snow white skin.
"My venom kills quickly you will soon parish," the snake said with a loud chuckle.
"Not before you!" Ai said as she drew her saber from her back and thrust it forwared in the snake.
Siasiami screamed as Ai,s blade pierced her black scales and ripped jaggedly into her dark heart.
Ai's mind then went blank as she drifted off into the night back to her home back to kiba back to love to ryue.
"Ai wake up you're goingto miss the bus for school", Ai's mother yelled from down stairs.
Ai awoke groagily and looked aroud the room her sister Mayling was already awake and waiting for her like a cheeta about to pounce on an atalope.
"It was only a dream no it couldnt have been it was to real,"Ai mumbled under her breath.
She could still smell the cherryblossoms and orcids on the river Mei's banks. She could still feel Ryue's toch on her skin.
"Where were you last night Ai?" mayling questioned
Her sisters questions brought her back and she finnaly belived it was a dream. She was not in kiba she was in America not Japan. She was in Batesville and she was about to miss the buss.
" That is none of your business sissy and you had better not tell mom!" Ai snapped a harsh tone of bitterness in her voice.
"Ok Ok lets just get on th Buss,"May ling suggested, "I don't want to ge into a fight with you sorry."